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"Tokyo-based" in 0.1

Cybozu, a Tokyo-based global software company.

I think "Tokyo-based" is not important

How about: "Cybozu, a global software company that provides web-based groupware services."

Or, If you intended to show the author is in east-asian culture, "Cybozu, a global software company founded in Japan"

"articulate" in 0.1.2

I was able to translate what I was doing unconsciously into words

I was able to articulate what I was doing unconsciously

The word "articulate" looks a little difficult for non-native

"there is an opposite opinion." in 0.1.2

Sould it be "there are some opposite opinions." ?